Colonel William A. Phillips

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2020 and 18 November 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Juboroj.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 January 2021 and 14 May 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kef1170.

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A request has been submitted to WikiProject United States for a new article to be created on the topic of Housing in the United States. Please join the discussion or consider contributing to the new article. Best regards, -- M2545 (talk) 08:17, 4 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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New Edits

Hello! My name is Kate, and I am a freshman at Rice University looking to potentially edit this article. I am hoping to add more detail to the consequences section of the article as well as add more structure to the article as a whole. Let me know if you have any feedback or ideas! Kef1170 (talk) 02:35, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

New Edits

Hello! I will be working on this article for the next 2 months, and would love any feedback or ideas! I am planning to add some historical context to the article as well as adding some legal information about eviction. Kef1170 (talk) 21:11, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Kate! Love the work so far, thank you for including sections on mental and physical health. There's more to evictions than just law. Aside from this, I like your inclusion of which groups are disproportionately affected by evictions, but I would like to see this expanded to include other disproportionate groups, if applicable. Maybe there's a similar trend occurring in cities with the highest eviction rates? It could be worth looking into. I think overall, length is missing in your new sections (which is understandable!) As you come back and add onto it, I'm sure you'll include more sources/references. Overall, good job!Mgregg21 (talk) 19:32, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Update Proposal

Hi! I am considering adding to this page for a Wikipedia class assignment. I would like to expand the section that focuses on disproportionately impacted evictees. Given the high rates of eviction for black women, I think it would be beneficial to include black women/women of color as a disproportionately impacted group. Also, I would like to include more information about the risk factors of eviction and how this contributes to increased eviction rates for women of color. Additionally, I want to add more information about the consequences of eviction, with emphasis on eviction mental health struggles. If you would like to read more about my Wiki project proposal, feel free to reference my user page. Thanks! Sam7688 (talk) 23:01, 13 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Poverty, Justice, and Human Capabilities, Section 1

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2022 and 15 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sam7688 (article contribs).

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Wikipedia Project

Hi! I will be revising this page for a class Wikipedia assignment. My goal is to improve the article by expanding previous sections, adding relevant research, and editing for grammar, clarity, and focus. I plan to expand the section "disproportionately impacted evictees" with an emphasis on women, Hispanic, and black communities. I also want to add information on the eviction process from a legal perspective, such as causes of eviction, types of evictions, and tenant rights. Additionally, I want to add information about the United States' eviction crisis and housing affordability problem. For more information, please see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sam7688/sandbox
If anyone has suggestions for how I could improve this article, please let me know! Sam7688 (talk) 22:49, 21 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sam7688 (talk) 02:39, 13 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review Assignment

Wonderful job with your contribution to this article! I am really impressed by your edits to the lead, as well as how you carefully balanced adding relevant and important new material without overpowering any sections. I would suggest that you add more context from the articles that you are referencing (like author names and years of publication) to improve the quality of the reference and the neutrality of the post as a whole. Additionally adding more images would improve the quality of the article by making it more visually appealing and engaging to viewers. The most important things you could do to improve this article is include more details from your sources to increase NPOV! Again, great work on such an important article. I look forward to seeing the final contribution! Madison Roy (talk) 18:55, 26 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review Assignment

This article is well written in that it is very direct, readable, and organized sensibly. I really was impressed by how concisely you were able to tackle a topic such as Eviction. Your writing was detailed and clear. In terms of changes, as it affects neutrality and scholarly backing, I would suggest a reduction in how much Matthew Desmond’s work is discussed as it is not scholarly work (as indicated in Resource list). Expanding on eviction policy (maybe place it near the section where evictee rights are discussed) and using a different source to display eviction from the evictees side as well as find a source that more thoroughly discusses reasons for evictions on the landlord’s side is what I believe would be the most important step from here on. Once again, fantastic job! EEmenike (talk) 01:20, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]