Battle of Old Fort Wayne

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@Indefatigable: Why is this article's tone not acceptable? Jarble (talk) 23:44, 18 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Just one passage has issues, where the paddling potential is discussed. "unrunnable killer class VI holes" - unless that's a formal classification in the sport, it sounds like a surfer dude, not an encyclopedia. "Huge volume, massive waves" - this sounds like a personal review, not something that can be sourced reliably. I thought about just deleting these phrases, but I think there is useful information there - we just need someone who knows more about kayaking than me to find sources and word the section encyclopedically. Indefatigable (talk) 03:05, 19 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]